PARIS DAILLENCOURT IS ABOUT TO CRUMBLE

A self-conscious, disaster-prone baker develops a crush on one of his fellow contestants on a famous British reality show.

Paris Daillencourt and self-confidence don't usually belong in the same sentence. While he may have grown up rather well-off, his wealthy background only seems to isolate him from his peers. His sole friend is his roommate, Morag, who strong-armed him into a friendship. It's because of her that he's showcasing his baking talents on Britain's favorite reality show, Bake Expectations. His first day on set turns into a disaster when he hits fellow contestant Tariq Hassan in the face with a refrigerator door, giving the man a bloody nose and interrupting the chocolate chip cookie challenge for both of them. Paris naturally feels gutted, though Tariq reassures him things are completely fine—no hard feelings. This back and forth, with Paris radiating anxiety and other characters trying to soothe him, sets up a cycle that occurs throughout the book. Paris will make a mistake (perceived or otherwise), agonize, and mentally beat himself up to the point of an anxiety attack until someone talks him down. Living with and treating an anxiety disorder is the bulk of Paris' journey. While it’s wonderful to see more mental health representation in romance, especially with a character who's on a journey to diagnosis, the level of attention Hall pays to Paris' anxiety can drown out the struggles faced by other characters. Tariq has his own challenges with Islamophobia and microaggressions, which don't get nearly as much attention. Several secondary characters are needlessly unpleasant, from Jennifer Hallet, the Bake Expectations producer, to Morag, Paris' roommate, who often undermines Paris' feelings and concerns. Hall has lofty aspirations in this romance that fail to fully rise. The complexity of the issues facing Paris and Tariq both separately and as a couple are explored unevenly and with resolutions that feel shaky at best.

An ambitious romance that fails to conquer the couple’s many obstacles.