THINK OF ENGLAND

A lonely woman’s painfully extended rite of passage is compassionately explored in this affecting, though uneven first novel by storywriter Dark (In the Gloaming, 2000, etc.).

It’s 1969 when we first meet protagonist Jane, the precociously introspective nine-year-old daughter of successful Pennsylvania surgeon Emlin MacLeod and his extroverted wife “Via” (Olivia), as their family of six eagerly await the Beatles’ first American TV appearance on The Ed Sullivan Show. Echoes of Robb Forman Dew’s domestic psychological studies are sounded gracefully in these early pages, which efficiently dramatize Jane’s secretiveness (she’s writing a story, which, she’ll later realize, “was meant to be a study of how a family pulls together to handle adversity”) and helpless love for the overburdened Emlin, as well as the emerging cracks in her parents’ seemingly perfect marriage. Later episodes observe Jane at age 24 as a tourist living in London in the orbits of a pair of glamorous poseurs whose affectations (as Dark acknowledges) resemble the behavior of Evelyn Waugh’s Bridesheads and an older American writer still “technically married” and emotionally unavailable; then in 2000, herself the single mother of nine-year-old Emily, back in America and returned home for Via’s 65th birthday party—during which both a long-delayed confrontation between mother and daughter, and the possibility of their reconciliation, finally occur. Think of England (its title a stiff-upper-lip mantra chanted by the veddy British side of Jane’s family) is smoothly written, and initially quite engaging, but founders when Jane (herself a well-portrayed and interesting character) plays second fiddle to her London chums, mercurial Colette and soulfully gay Nigel (both clichés), and obsesses over novelist Clay(ton) West, an idea who never comes to life. Only Jane’s globe-hopping gay Uncle Francis manages to liven things up occasionally.

At best, a qualified success. Dark’s most accomplished work thus far remains her short fiction.