Portals, Passages & Pathways

In Maul’s debut novel, two small-town teenage protagonists travel from Earth to a magical fantasy world to settle its destiny—and theirs.

One of the teenagers is a “chosen one” of sorts, young Simon Whittaker, whose best friend and her family have been watching over him until he assumes his role as a guardian of the war-torn land of Magnanthia, which waits beyond a sorcerous portal. Chosen by the Ring of Affinity for its own mysterious reasons, Simon journeys through the portal to uphold the faith of those who still believe in the guardians. But he must survive many perils as well as hard training by strange new companions—a swordsman, a ranger, a wizard and a cleric. At the same time, teenager Jak Jakobsin is dragged through the portal by servants of the overlord of Bedlam, who plots to ruin Magnanthia with sinister magic and an army of the walking dead. Jak is seduced by the power of evil wizardry and soon becomes a formidable up-and-coming sorcerer. The wild card in all of this is King Elderten of Magnanthia, who blames the guardians for the death of his queen. He seeks to kill the guardians, endangering Simon and unwittingly playing into the hands of the powers of Bedlam. Competently written, the novel delivers believable characters and serviceable dialogue. The pacing is fine, although the transition between Earth and Magnanthia doesn’t happen until roughly halfway through the book, draining narrative force. Most of all, the worldbuilding is typical: The novel borrows, sometimes too heavily, from Dungeons & Dragons, C.S. Lewis’ Narnia series and Harry Potter.

Moderately entertaining, somewhat derivative YA fantasy.