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THE UNFINISHED by Cheryl Isaacs Kirkus Star

THE UNFINISHED

by Cheryl Isaacs

Pub Date: Sept. 3rd, 2024
ISBN: 9780063287389
Publisher: Heartdrum

In the forest outside Crook’s Falls lies an unnaturally still body of black water that hides—until it’s hungry.

Legends say that the pond is connected to the Ragged Man, who lurks in the shadows: “Walk with him, and you don’t come back.” When Avery, a Kanyen’kehá:ka (Mohawk) high school athlete with a white dad, defies warnings and ventures off the trail during a run, she discovers the deep black water that awakens endless nightmares. Sensing an eerie presence, Avery flees but can’t escape the water’s calls. She’s never felt connected to “the culture [that’s] supposed to be mine” and hesitates to seek the truth until the danger becomes undeniable as her nightmares intensify and people begin to disappear. When Key, the boy who’s her best friend and romantic interest, vanishes, Avery seeks guidance from Elders and learns more about the black water and the Ragged Man. In a desperate attempt to save Key and her town, she navigates a chilling mystery, torn between following wisdom passed down by her Elders and risking everything for love. Against a haunting backdrop, debut novelist Isaacs, who is Kanyen’kehá:ka and white, skillfully portrays a young woman’s struggles with the fallout of having distanced herself from her ancestors, showing how she comes to acknowledge this disconnect—grounded in avoidance of pain and discomfort—and wrestles with the resulting regret.

A harrowing work that combines suspense with a coming-of-age journey of cultural exploration.

(Kanyen’kéha glossary, note from Cynthia Leitich Smith) (Supernatural. 13-18)