A promising tale of an ex-soldier, hampered by a meandering, implausible plot.
In Mitchell’s debut novel, an American Vietnam veteran recovers from severe injuries and wrestles with memories of war.
After his mother dies in an automobile accident, Kelly O’Brian enlists in the Army and serves as a first lieutenant in the infantry in a treacherous stretch of wilderness, the Ho Bo Woods of Vietnam. In May 1969, he’s badly wounded, and after an extended convalescence in Japan, he returns to the United States and pursues a college degree in Florida. Kelly manages to build a life with all the trappings of success and happiness; he eventually heads a multibillion-dollar construction company, marries a woman he deeply loves, and raises a beautiful daughter. Nevertheless, he’s haunted by the trauma that he experienced during the war, and by the “sleeping devils inside of him” that are sometimes awakened when he faces danger. The latter happens with implausible frequency in Mitchell’s novel. While overseeing the construction of a highway through the Panamanian jungle, for example, Kelly is forced to contend with armed bandits; later, he kills a man who’s assaulting a woman and thwarts a terrorist takeover of a commercial plane. The heart of the story, though, is the protagonist’s search for emotional resolution. After a tragedy, he can no longer postpone his need for closure; he experiences a dramatic longing that takes him back to the beginning of his trials—the Ho Bo Woods. The author impressively brings to life the macabre horror of war, and his depictions of frenzied combat have an unalloyed feeling of realism. However, the overall plot isn’t as believable as these scenes are, and what begins as an intriguing psychological drama eventually degrades into a clichéd tale of action and adventure. Also, Mitchell’s prose, and particularly the dialogue, can feel inauthentic and overwritten. For example, when Kelly first asks out his future wife, Cindy, she stiltedly tells him, “Kelly, you seem like a really nice guy. You’re courteous, and you speak well. Even with that dueling scar on your cheek you’re rather handsome.”
A promising tale of an ex-soldier, hampered by a meandering, implausible plot.Pub Date: June 30, 2015
ISBN: 978-1-63415-444-4
Page Count: 321
Publisher: Coleman Mitchell Books
Review Posted Online: Feb. 1, 2019
Review Program: Kirkus Indie
Heartfelt, yes, but pretty routine.
Life lessons.
Angie Malone, the youngest of a big, warm Italian-American family, returns to her Pacific Northwest hometown to wrestle with various midlife disappointments: her divorce, Papa’s death, a downturn in business at the family restaurant, and, above all, her childlessness. After several miscarriages, she, a successful ad exec, and husband Conlan, a reporter, befriended a pregnant young girl and planned to adopt her baby—and then the birth mother changed her mind. Angie and Conlan drifted apart and soon found they just didn’t love each other anymore. Metaphorically speaking, “her need for a child had been a high tide, an overwhelming force that drowned them. A year ago, she could have kicked to the surface but not now.” Sadder but wiser, Angie goes to work in the struggling family restaurant, bickering with Mama over updating the menu and replacing the ancient waitress. Soon, Angie befriends another young girl, Lauren Ribido, who’s eager to learn and desperately needs a job. Lauren’s family lives on the wrong side of the tracks, and her mother is a promiscuous alcoholic, but Angie knows nothing of this sad story and welcomes Lauren into the DeSaria family circle. The girl listens in, wide-eyed, as the sisters argue and make wisecracks and—gee-whiz—are actually nice to each other. Nothing at all like her relationship with her sluttish mother, who throws Lauren out when boyfriend David, en route to Stanford, gets her pregnant. Will Lauren, who’s just been accepted to USC, let Angie adopt her baby? Well, a bit of a twist at the end keeps things from becoming too predictable.
Heartfelt, yes, but pretty routine.Pub Date: July 1, 2004
ISBN: 0-345-46750-7
Page Count: 400
Publisher: Ballantine
Review Posted Online: May 19, 2010
Kirkus Reviews Issue: May 15, 2004
Dated sermonizing on career versus motherhood, and conflict driven by characters’ willed helplessness, sap this tale of...
Lifelong, conflicted friendship of two women is the premise of Hannah’s maudlin latest (Magic Hour, 2006, etc.), again set in Washington State.
Tallulah “Tully” Hart, father unknown, is the daughter of a hippie, Cloud, who makes only intermittent appearances in her life. Tully takes refuge with the family of her “best friend forever,” Kate Mularkey, who compares herself unfavorably with Tully, in regards to looks and charisma. In college, “TullyandKate” pledge the same sorority and major in communications. Tully has a life goal for them both: They will become network TV anchorwomen. Tully lands an internship at KCPO-TV in Seattle and finagles a producing job for Kate. Kate no longer wishes to follow Tully into broadcasting and is more drawn to fiction writing, but she hesitates to tell her overbearing friend. Meanwhile a love triangle blooms at KCPO: Hard-bitten, irresistibly handsome, former war correspondent Johnny is clearly smitten with Tully. Expecting rejection, Kate keeps her infatuation with Johnny secret. When Tully lands a reporting job with a Today-like show, her career shifts into hyperdrive. Johnny and Kate had started an affair once Tully moved to Manhattan, and when Kate gets pregnant with daughter Marah, they marry. Kate is content as a stay-at-home mom, but frets about being Johnny’s second choice and about her unrealized writing ambitions. Tully becomes Seattle’s answer to Oprah. She hires Johnny, which spells riches for him and Kate. But Kate’s buttons are fully depressed by pitched battles over slutwear and curfews with teenaged Marah, who idolizes her godmother Tully. In an improbable twist, Tully invites Kate and Marah to resolve their differences on her show, only to blindside Kate by accusing her, on live TV, of overprotecting Marah. The BFFs are sundered. Tully’s latest attempt to salvage Cloud fails: The incorrigible, now geriatric hippie absconds once more. Just as Kate develops a spine, she’s given some devastating news. Will the friends reconcile before it’s too late?
Dated sermonizing on career versus motherhood, and conflict driven by characters’ willed helplessness, sap this tale of poignancy.Pub Date: Feb. 1, 2008
ISBN: 978-0-312-36408-3
Page Count: 496
Publisher: St. Martin's
Review Posted Online: May 19, 2010
Kirkus Reviews Issue: Nov. 1, 2007
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