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PENANCE by Eliza Clark

PENANCE

by Eliza Clark

Pub Date: Sept. 26th, 2023
ISBN: 9780063327856
Publisher: Harper/HarperCollins

Three girls in a failing seaside town brutally murder a classmate in this (fictional) true-crime exposé.

True crime has become such a ubiquitous genre over the last 10 years—through podcasts, television, and nonfiction books—that it’s now fodder for fiction. Clark, who was recently named to the Best of Young British Novelists by Granta, approaches the genre with both a critical eye and an instinct for the lurid. The novel is framed as a nonfiction account of the brutal murder of a teenage girl by three of her classmates, written by disgraced tabloid reporter Alec Z. Carelli, who has unethically tinkered with his material. Joan Wilson, the victim of the crime, was tortured, assumed dead, and then set on fire, although she survived long enough to seek out help. Carelli investigates Joan’s life as well as the lives and actions of each of the three perpetrators: posh, bratty Angelica Stirling-Stewart; Joan’s old friend Violet Hubbard; and disturbed Dolly Hart, who’s obsessed with a hunky school shooter. Interspersed with Carelli’s reporting are podcast transcripts, fan fiction and online forum excerpts, and historical background about the bleak northern English town where the murder took place. Clark isn’t afraid to write about gruesome violence or bullying, and she tries to critique our culture’s fixation on true crime. Unfortunately, the execution of this long, often tedious novel is not strong enough to support its ideas; instead, it reads like just another grisly story of a murdered girl. Great investigative nonfiction authors write novelistic prose, while Clark’s is clunky by comparison. The structure of her novel is similarly uninspiring, moving from one long interview to the next with little analysis. This book is not believable as a work of investigative nonfiction, which renders its conceit annoying rather than provocative.

An ambitious sophomore attempt bites off more than it can chew.