THE BOOK OF TORMOD

Volunteering to deliver a secret message lands young Tormod, a Scot, on a journey through 1307 France and Spain. After delivering the message, he falls into the job of safely guiding his superheroes, the Knights Templar, and becomes apprentice to the virtuous and strong knight Alexander. Alexander, like Tormod, experiences visions of the future and knows that Tormod has endangered both their lives. They run from King Philippe le Bel of France, protecting a dangerous, vision-enhancing carving. In the course of his travels, Tormod taps into his mystical powers, which change as the plot suits. Tormod is funny and kind, but the antique sound of his language may put readers off. He’s a very considerate narrator, though, frequently stopping to explain this or that medieval detail—a technique that enlightens but also utterly destroys the fourth wall. Riddled with consistency problems, the book jumps from event to event with little regard to transition. Though Tormod’s world is foreign to readers, debut novelist Black spends no time building it, even as the adventure moves along. The concept is appealing, but the execution fails. (Fiction. 12 & up)