AT THE EDGE OF THE HAIGHT

A young homeless woman is an unwitting witness to murder in this debut novel set on the streets of San Francisco.

All 20-year-old Madlynne Donaldo wants to do is to live an invisible life in the shadows of Golden Gate Park with her friends Ash, Hope, and Fleet. Having run away from Los Angeles, she's trying to figure out what her next steps should be even though life can only be lived a day at a time on the fringes of San Francisco. Unfortunately, as she’s out walking her dog, she finds teen Shane Golden, who's taking his last breaths, and also spots his killer. Soon, Shane’s parents come looking for answers, and Maddy feels pressured into helping. Maddy’s past as the daughter of an absent father and a depressive mother is interesting but blurs away just before it can gather enough steam to be revealing. Seligman constantly shifts the narrative’s focus as it chugs forward in fits and starts. Dave Golden, Shane’s father, is unconvincing as a grieving dad, and his investment in Maddy feel tacked on and unrealistic. The novel is also unclear about its central thesis: Is this a murder mystery with a look at homelessness, or is it mostly about homelessness with a side of murder? Tangential plot points—Fleet is hospitalized from a drug reaction and Ash suddenly takes off for a Wyoming wilderness camp—further fray the already loosely held storylines. All told, Seligman is to be commended for an insightful portrayal of homelessness. She’s at her best when showing just how tenuous life on the streets can be. “Stories were hard to decipher because they were filtered through people,” a character says. This might well apply to this heartfelt and unfocused novel.

Brave but scattershot storytelling.