WHEN A DRAGON FALLS

A dragon shifter hunts for her kidnapped brother.

Princess Lenushka, or Lennie, of Norveshka is literally one of a kind: She’s the only female dragon shifter in the world. The patriarchal nobility insists she must marry another dragon shifter in order to take her rightful place on the throne, even though she proved her mettle as a highly decorated soldier. All of Lennie’s plans are thrown into chaos on the day of her cousin Roslyn’s wedding. A man named Greer, a member of an evil group called the Brotherhood of the Sun, kills the groom and kidnaps several powerful men, including Lennie’s brother, Pendras. Roslyn and Lennie are determined to find and rescue Pendras and the other kidnapped men. At the beginning of their journey, Lennie accidentally harms Bran Morris, a shifter known as the Raven, while in her dragon form. He has always had a strong dislike of dragons and this injury only hardens his beliefs. Bran has been hunting Greer for months, desperate for revenge on the man who killed his brother. Lennie decides to keep the truth that she's a dragon shifter from Bran, knowing he will be a valuable ally on the hunt for Greer. The first half of the book is bogged down in getting all the characters on the road together. When the focus finally shifts to Bran and Lennie’s romance, it feels rushed and underdeveloped. The romance is low-energy because Bran mostly moons over Lennie, convinced she’s the perfect woman. He refers to her as his dream girl while she wallows in guilt for lying to him, and all the conflict hinges on the eventual reveal of her dragon form. The magical world operates on a strong, absolute gender binary, which makes the book feel dated.

Slow and plodding.