I'M SORRY YOU GOT MAD

An epistolary tale told mostly in drafts as a boy completes a teacher’s requirement to write an apology.

Ripped and crumpled notes tell most of the story as Jack, a brown-skinned boy with straight brown hair, grumps through the school day. An early draft reads, “DEAR ZOE, I’M SORRY YOU GOT SO MAD!!! JACK.” Light-skinned, dark-haired Ms. Rice, who looks over his drafts, writes back, “Dear Jack, Please try again. Love, Ms. Rice.” As each subsequent draft makes incremental progress, the story of what happened emerges (“I’m sorry FOR REAL that your castle got knocked over”). Kwon’s charming art, rendered in ink, then colored and collaged digitally, tells a parallel emotional story as Jack goes from angry to chastised, then back to angry (a wonderful spread shows him expressing his rage while taking part in the day’s art assignment: “Paint Your Feelings!”), and finally thoughtful. Meanwhile, the classroom activities with their own small dramas continue around him. In a late draft, the crux of the issue becomes clear. Jack had wanted to play with Zoe and her castle, but two boys told him that castles were for girls. Ms. Rice replies, “Dear Jack, I’m sorry that happened to you. I’ll talk to Ben and Jeremy… You’re almost there.” Ms. Rice’s gentle and kind voice guides Jack to a most satisfying apology and ending. Jack’s class is diverse.

A master class in apologies and in storytelling through words and art.