COUPLETS

A 20-something Brooklynite remakes the form and function of love in this story told in rhyming couplets.

The speaker of this novel in verse is, at first, enviably settled in her life. She enjoys her job teaching composition; she loves her boyfriend; she feels “if not exactly pride, at least the pretty, / riskless pleasure of conformity.” Then she meets an electrifying woman who sweeps her into a tumultuous, explosively erotic relationship. Through a series of discrete stanzas, themselves portioned into rhyming couplets, the speaker narrates the dissolution of her relationship with her boyfriend and the charged early months of her new love affair, which vivifies all the quotidian objects of her life even as it plunges her into sincere mourning for all that was lost in the breakup with the man she “revered / but felt [she] had been failing many years.” The author’s formal choices underscore the thematic obsessions of the book. The rhyming couplets create conversations within themselves, each line echoing the other’s language in sonic duets reminiscent of the ways couples reflect each other’s identities. The conceit is clever, and the verse itself is full of startling, effervescent imagery—not to mention full-throated eroticism—that is a pleasure to read. However, the only fully realized character in this tightly controlled exploration of identity and desire is the speaker herself. Perhaps this is the result of the form, which reflects the boyfriend and the lover as elements of the speaker’s own voice; perhaps it is a more deliberate flattening, illustrating the speaker’s statement that “love / has been, above all things, the engine of / self-knowledge in my life.” Regardless, the relentless interiority restricts the reader’s engagement to only those things that illustrate the speaker’s blooming selfhood. All other characters become symbols of the speaker’s progress through her journey of self-realization rather than people in their own rights. Which leaves the reader to ask how much more real or nuanced our narrator could have seemed if the characters that accompany her transformation were afforded the same ability to look into their own mirrors.

A bold reengagement with the novel’s time-tested staple subject: romantic love.