THE WORLD GIVES WAY

Burdened with the knowledge that the world is ending, an indentured servant tries to make the most of what's left of her life.

More than a century ago, humans left Earth on a world-ship bound for Telos. The rich and powerful bought their way aboard, but for the poor, a 200-year contract of generational servitude, which would end only upon arrival at their destination, proved to be the only means of getting off-world. Just before their deaths by suicide, the Carlyles tell 25-year-old Myrra—the third-generation indentured servant whose contract they own—that space will tear the irreparably damaged ship apart decades before it ever reaches Telos. Honoring her owners' final wishes, Myrra takes the Carlyles' infant daughter, Charlotte, and sets out as a fugitive contract-breaker to look for a good place to die. On her trail is Tobias—the police detective son of criminals, desperate to distance himself from his parents' legacy—who begins to feel a strong kinship with the resourceful young woman. Unfortunately, even though the third-person narration moves between their perspectives in alternating chapters, Myrra and Tobias never really come alive. The narrative voice keeps both characters at a distance that prevents readers from making emotional connections with them. Levien's debut makes no secret of the fact that the world is ending, but its shallow character sketches lack the depth necessary to make an audience care what happens to its cast before the final earthquake comes for them.

An ambitious debut that falls just short of landing among the stars.