HOOK

A loathsome man is murdered, but the detective on the case keeps coming up empty in Williams’ mystery series installment.

When actuary Devin McDonald is murdered by a speeding car, the list of suspects is very long, indeed; he was an “overbearing, pompous windbag” seemingly despised by everyone at the insurance company where he worked. Police detectives Salvador Mitchelland Eddie “Sandman” Sandovan discover that terrorizing co-workers wasn’t enough for him; he was also a “prolific commenter” on social media forums, relentlessly antagonizing his interlocuters—a miserable example of “toxic disinhibition,” which leads the two detectives to wonder if he might have been killed by someone he offended online. Nonetheless, they’re at their wits’ end after failing to come up with any concrete leads. However, the killer, Kenneth Slocombe, a deeply disturbed man who considered his act of murder “righteous retribution” for Devin’s anti-social transgressions, is livid that his act hasn’t received more attention, and he decides to target Mitchell and Sandovan. Meanwhile, Mitchell faces a difficult moral dilemma when he discovers that Alastair Laing, the father of his girlfriend, Mya, is having an extramarital affair. Williams intelligently constructs a gripping crime drama, and it’s no less suspenseful for the fact that the identity of the killer is never concealed from readers. The principal weakness of the novel, however, is the characterization of Kenneth, who seems like a stale caricature; his sections are often a patchwork of clichés. Williams’ prose is often sharp—unadorned but dramatically effective. However, it slips into banality whenever Kenneth appears: “Kenneth went about his normal routine, wondering if his life would be different. He was, after all, a murderer. He had taken a life. Ended a fellow human being’s existence. Violated the most serious of the commandments.” Still, the story remains a captivating one that thoughtfully explores the way that online acrimony can transform into real-life violence.

An often entertaining and timely crime novel.